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My Review:Title: Davy Harwood (The Immortal Prophecy, #1)
Author: Tijan
Series: The Immortal Prophesy #1
Published by: Indie
Release Date: April 9, 2011
Format: Kindle Book
Pages: 357
Genres: New Adult, Paranormal Romance
Reading Challenges: CC's Goodreads Reading Challenge
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My rating:
Blurb:Being empathic is the least of Davy's problems. She wants to go to college and live a normal life until someone gives her something she doesn't want. Now she has to deal with the supernatural and a prophecy that no one knows about.
Favorite Quote:
Blue got her name for her graying hair that she dyed with blue highlights. She liked that it gave her an out-of-this-world quality although she was very much an earthly woman. Every one of the bracelets jangling on her wrist stood for a cause – pollution, cancer, save the forests, happiness from an orgasm.
This book was ALL over the place. I liked it but you had to really sift through the dialogue because Davy didn’t know what she was saying half the time. She would start a conversation about one thought then jump midway to another without finishing the first thought. It was very confusing at first and lots of it was nonsense that wasn’t necessary for the progression of the story.
Like for instance, the attraction, what the heck was that about? It was like she just threw it in with no rhyme or reason. The story doesn’t change whether she sleeps with him or not. And her so-called friend? I fail to see how they were ever friends. She was snappy, demanding and unapologetic when she was clearly in the wrong. And she was working for the wrong side! Constantly putting her efforts to better herself down, and trying to convince her to stop trying. Who counts that person as a friend? A lot is alluded to with their background but never clarified, which leads me to believe this story had no real back story or origin.
It needs loads of editing and I don’t see myself putting any more effort into it.
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